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07/07/2012

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Greeryng1

I was instantly drwn into this. Wonderful use of imagery "Poppies from a bagel all scattered across a plate", "hair slightly damped and still spiked from the towel;s drag". I like that the damage from the whirlwind brings them together. You left me wanting to read more.

Hunter

Well there's a second part up now. Check it out : )

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