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I was instantly drwn into this. Wonderful use of imagery "Poppies from a bagel all scattered across a plate", "hair slightly damped and still spiked from the towel;s drag". I like that the damage from the whirlwind brings them together. You left me wanting to read more.


Well there's a second part up now. Check it out : )

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